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Stephanie Pekarsky's 12/1 assignment for Intro to Professional Writing Stephanie Pekarsky Dear Ms. Jesse Rosenblum: We have been handed a chance to reconnect with the city of Trenton. For the first time, we have been given the chance to host a junior golf clinic on this campus, with golf star Tiger Woods putting in guest appearances and Nike providing the funds. I can see only positives if we decide to undertake this project. Ever since we changed our name from Trenton State College to The College of New Jersey, we have been accused of trying to distance ourselves from Trenton. If we decide to host this junior golf clinic, we will not only be giving the children of Trenton a wonderful opportunity but will be showing both alumni and prospective students that we still care about the surrounding community. The junior golf clinic is free, and will allow children with lesser means to immerse themselves in a sport that is becoming a prime extracurricular activity to people everywhere. Children who have nothing to do this summer can keep themselves busy by doing something constructive and, by doing this on a college campus, experiencing an atmosphere of higher education. The children will also be able to meet someone who is considered among many to be a positive role model. Tiger Woods has shown how he has overcome the obstacle of his race by becoming involved in a race that, until now, has been predominantly for the rich white community. Evem more than this, he has become a star in that sport. Tiger Woods has gained the respect of all races with what he has accomplished. We can give these children something they normally would not be able to afford, and at the same time, improve our image among people who are unhappy with our name change. There are just a few considerations that have come up in regards to Nike and Tiger Woods being in this campus. Nike is one of the organizations associated with sweatshop labor and Tiger Woods is one of their prime spokesmen. As you are aware, a small group of students has come to us asking us to sign a no sweat pledge. With the signing of this document, the administration would renounce its relationship with all companies associated with sweatshop labor. If we host a program that includes having Nike and Tiger Woods on this campus, we could lose credibility with a number of students. This program may seem to go against everything they are fighting for. We would not be able to run the program without Nike. We would not be able to afford it. If we chose not to host this program, it would seem as if we were distancing ourselves even more from Trenton. We need to consider which choice would do the greater amount of good. In my opinion, there are more pros than cons if we host this program. By allowing Nike to be on our campus, we are not actually initiating a business relationship between us. We are only providing the site for a very worthwhile program. Again, looking at the greater amount of good for the greater amount of people, this program would provide an amazing opportunity for many of the children in the Trenton area, as well as promoting the college's desired image of being in touch with the community. These positives greatly outweigh the result of perhaps angering the few students who are behind the no sweat pledge. I hope that you will take all this into consideration and end up with the same conclusion I did - hosting this program is the best thing we can do. Sincerely, Stephanie Pekarsky Office of College Relations |